I like how you addressed the opposing view regarding your competitive nature and then used examples to explain why competitive nature is good thing and not a bad one. Your paper feels natural and honest, while at the same time using formal language. I love how you ended your paper with this “Although this competition with myself and others isn’t always a good thing, being a competitor pushes me to strive for better and perform my best”, because it summarizes your reasons on why being competitive is a good thing.
I like how you addressed the opposing view regarding your competitive nature and then used examples to explain why competitive nature is good thing and not a bad one. Your paper feels natural and honest, while at the same time using formal language. I love how you ended your paper with this “Although this competition with myself and others isn’t always a good thing, being a competitor pushes me to strive for better and perform my best”, because it summarizes your reasons on why being competitive is a good thing.
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